Chapter 6 : Ramona called at 8:30 Wednesday. Lane answered on the second ring.
She said her name and her mother's name and the words "22-C," and there was a pause so long that she checked her phone to make sure the call was still connected.
"Come by at ten," Lane said.
He was sixty-four, thinner than Dale, with the same gray hair but no gel, and he was wearing a light blue shirt with the sleeves rolled up and jeans, and his office was one room with a metal desk and a legal bookcase and three file boxes stacked in a corner with the tops off. The CBD store below had pumped the whole upstairs full of a smell that was somewhere between a health food store and a locker room.
"Sit," Lane said. He had a file on the desk in front of him that had Ramona's last name written on the tab in blue marker. He had not put it there in the last half hour.
"You knew I was coming," Ramona said.
"I heard about Saturday," Lane said. "The whole county heard about Saturday. My sister-in-law texted me a video and my son texted me a video and my barber texted me a video. You want water? There's a fridge in the hallway."
"I'm fine."
"Suit yourself." Lane leaned back in his chair. "You want to ask me what I know about the 2016 confirmation deed and the 2018 correction deed."
"Yes."
"And you want to know whether I drafted them because my brother told me to, or whether I drafted them because I thought your mother wanted them."
"One of those."
Lane nodded and looked at the ceiling for a second.
"Your mother called me in April of 2016," he said. "She called me directly. She had already done the quitclaim to you with Dale. She said she wanted the HOA to have a clean record in case the neighborhood ever went to war over the pool. She said — and I remember this because she said it twice, once on the phone and once when I went out to her kitchen — she said, 'I want the record to be so clean nobody can say I ever handed my daughter a mess.'"
Ramona did not say anything.
"So I drafted the confirmation deed," Lane said. "She signed it at her kitchen table. Dale notarized it. I filed it the next morning. The 2018 correction deed was because the 2016 one had a scrivener's error — there was a typo in the appurtenance clause. Standard thing. I drafted the correction. Dale notarized it. That's what I did."
"You knew what the quitclaim to me said."
"Of course I knew. Your mother made sure I knew. She showed me the original."
"Then you knew the HOA was taking the parcel subject to my remainder interest."
Lane looked at Ramona for a long moment.
"Technically," he said, "yes."
"Technically."
"There is not a real estate lawyer in this county who would have drafted that confirmation deed for the HOA the way I did if they had not read the quitclaim first. I wasn't going to draft a confirmation deed off a one-page quitclaim I hadn't read. Your mother would have fired me."
"Did Dale read it?"
Lane's jaw worked.
"He told me he read it," Lane said.
"What do you think?"
"I think my brother hasn't read a document from a kitchen table in his entire life without his truck running in the driveway."
Ramona let that sit.
"So," she said, "did Dale know or not."
Lane stood up. He walked over to the file boxes in the corner and pulled one out and set it on the desk and opened it and flipped through it. Inside were manila folders with neighbors' names on the tabs. He pulled one out — Ramona Vega — and opened it. There were five pages in it. He set them on the desk face-up.
"Look," he said.
The top page was the draft of the confirmation deed. The second page was the signed execution copy. The third page was a letter from Lane to Dale, dated April 19, 2016, on Brandt & Associates letterhead, one paragraph long. Ramona read it.
*Dale — Confirming the confirmation deed is filed. Per Barbara's instructions I am noting the underlying quitclaim to Ramona in the file. Please keep a copy of the quitclaim in the clubhouse records so there is no ambiguity if a future board needs to look. Lane.*
Ramona read the last line twice.
"Keep a copy of the quitclaim in the clubhouse records," she said.
"Right there in writing," Lane said. "I told him. He was supposed to put a copy of your mother's quitclaim in the clubhouse files."
"He didn't."
"Didn't he?"
"He didn't."
Lane put the pages back in the folder and slid it across the desk.
"That folder's not mine," he said. "That folder's been in my office for eight years because my brother never came to pick it up. He asked me to hold it. I held it. Now I'd like it to leave. Do whatever you want with it."
Ramona picked up the folder and set it in her tote.
"Why?" she asked. "Why are you giving this to me?"
Lane stood up and walked to the window that looked out at Main Street.
"Because my brother is going to lose either way," he said. "If he read the quitclaim and buried the file, he's not just a bully, he's a notary with a problem. If he didn't read the quitclaim, he's a notary who stamped a deed he hadn't read and then spent three years fining the woman he stamped it for. Neither of those is a version of him I want to be sitting next to at Thanksgiving for the next ten years."
He turned around.
"There's a third thing," he said. "You know there's a third thing, right?"
"No."
"There's a notary log missing. The 2012–2015 one. Dale kept two because in this state you have two four-year commissions and he started the second one early because the state changed the form in 2015. The earlier log is in a safe-deposit box at Carthage Savings. He keeps it there because there's a page in it he doesn't want the clubhouse to see."
"What page?"
Lane said nothing.
"Mr. Brandt."
"There's an entry in that log," Lane said, "from 2013. It's an acknowledgment on a deed for the parcel across the street from you. Unit 14's right-of-way strip. Grantor: Alder Creek Homeowners Association, Inc. Grantee: Dale Brandt, personally. Fifty feet by eighty feet. The strip between your driveway and the common parcel."
He looked at Ramona.
"He owns the strip, Ms. Vega. He bought it from the association in 2013 for a dollar, notarized his own signature, and never filed the deed with the county. There's no record of it anywhere in the index."
Ramona sat very still.
"That strip is the only legal access from the public street to the pool parcel," she said.
"That strip is the only legal access from the public street to the pool parcel," Lane agreed.
"Without it, the pool parcel is landlocked."
"Effectively, yes."
"So the confirmation deed he notarized in 2016 to the HOA, and the correction deed in 2018 — "
"Correction deeds don't fix landlocked parcels," Lane said. "You can't fix access by notarizing paper. You fix it by owning the strip. Which he does. In his personal name. In a log he never filed."
Ramona sat in Lane Brandt's office above the CBD store and looked at the folder in her tote and did not move for a full minute.
"Mr. Brandt," she said finally. "What do you think I should do with this."
"That's the first time anybody's asked me that in this whole thing," Lane said. "So I'll answer it like I would answer it for your mother. Go to the county recorder. Pull the strip's index. There won't be anything there. Then go to the bank and ask them who has a key to box 441, and ask them when the last time the box was accessed was, and ask them whether the access log is available to the HOA. Then go home and wait."
"For what?"
"For the inevitable," Lane said.
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- 1One second the pool deck was a wall of noise — cicadas, a radio playing something with too much bass, kids screaming through the chain-link, the flat slap of wet feet on hot concrete — and the next second all of it went thin, like somebod
- 2The first thing that happened was that Marcus, the pool desk clerk, came out of the clubhouse with the clipboard that carried the membership roster for the season. He was nineteen, skinny, still in his school polo from a summer internship
- 3Ramona walked over at 4:45 in flip-flops and a clean gray t-shirt, with her tote on her shoulder and the deed in a gallon Ziploc bag because Delia had brought the peas and made her put a bag of them on her cheek, and the peas had left a w
- 4Dale's signature on the deed was not pretty. It slanted up to the right, the way signatures do when you're signing on the hood of a car or a counter you're not leaning on, and the "D" had a habit of losing its loop at the end. His "Brandt
- 5The earlier log was in the safe-deposit box that Dale Brandt kept at the Carthage Savings Bank on Main Street, box 441, and Ramona did not know that until Tuesday morning at 9:12 AM, when Sonya called her from the bank's parking lot.
- 6Ramona called at 8:30 Wednesday. Lane answered on the second ring.
- 7Ramona was on the second floor at 8:05 Thursday with the strip's legal description written on an index card, and she handed the card to the woman at the desk, and the woman typed it into the terminal, and looked at the screen, and looked
- 8"Yolanda says the box has been empty since Monday," Sonya said. "The log shows Dale was in there Monday at 9:07. Yolanda says she didn't see what he took out. She wasn't working the vault that day."





