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Chapter 4 : Dale's signature on the deed was not pretty. It slanted up to the right, the way signatures do when you're signing on the hood of a car or a counter you're not leaning on, and the "D" had a habit of losing its loop at the end. His "Brandt

Story: The HOA President Swiped My Pool Badge and Called Me a Squatter — Then I Held Up the Deed He Notarized Himself

The stamp impression was a square purple-blue box with his name, his commission number, and the words "Notary Public — State at Large — Commission Expires 03/14/2022."

The date line read 4/12/2016.

The deed described the property as "Lot 22-C, Alder Creek Subdivision, as recorded in Plat Book 41, Page 113, Public Records of the County, together with all appurtenances, including the entire common parcel on which the community pool, clubhouse apron, and adjoining walkway are situate, reserving to grantor a life estate in unit 14 of said subdivision for the remainder of grantor's natural life."

That last clause — the life estate — was the one that had taken Ramona four readings to understand. Her mother had not given her the parcel at all in 2016. Her mother had given her the *remainder*. The life estate meant her mother owned the parcel until she died, and Ramona owned it after. The whole thing had been structured so her mother could live in unit 14 until the end without triggering anything, and then Ramona would hold the parcel, and the HOA would have to ask *her* permission to use the pool, and *she* could decide whether to give it.

Her mother had rented the pool back to the HOA — informally, of course, because everything her mother did was informal — for a dollar a year. That rental agreement was in Ramona's tote too, on a single sheet of notebook paper with both signatures at the bottom. It was not notarized, because it didn't need to be. It was just an agreement.

When Ramona unfolded the deed on her lap in the clubhouse meeting room, the first person to move was Sonya. She leaned over the table, glasses pushed up on her forehead, and read the notary block out loud, slowly, in her dental hygienist's voice, the way she'd read a chart to a patient.

"Dale Brandt. Commission number 10-903-114. Expires March 14, 2022."

She sat back.

Dale's face had gone the color of skim milk.

"Mr. Brandt," Arthur Penn said, "is there a copy of your notary log in the clubhouse?"

There was a pause that lasted about four seconds. Ramona counted it.

"Yes," Dale said.

"Would you retrieve it, please."

Dale did not move.

"Mr. Brandt."

"It's in the safe."

"Then please retrieve it."

Dale stood up. He walked out of the meeting room and down the hall to the closet where the clubhouse safe was kept — a small fire safe, bolted to the floor, combination lock, two drawers. Ramona could hear him dialing the combination through the wall, which was thinner than it should have been.

He came back with a black binder, the kind with the metal corner protectors, and set it on the folding table. It was smaller than the fine ledger. It was about an inch thick. On the spine was a white label that read "NOTARY 2015–2022."

"Open it," Penn said.

Dale opened it.

The log had columns: date, name, document type, fee. Ramona's mother's entry was on the ninth page. 4/12/2016. "Barbara Vega." Document: "Quitclaim Deed."

Dale's handwriting on the log entry looked exactly like his handwriting on the fine ledger. Same slanted "D." Same missing "t."

"That is your handwriting," Penn said.

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  1. 1One second the pool deck was a wall of noise — cicadas, a radio playing something with too much bass, kids screaming through the chain-link, the flat slap of wet feet on hot concrete — and the next second all of it went thin, like somebod
  2. 2The first thing that happened was that Marcus, the pool desk clerk, came out of the clubhouse with the clipboard that carried the membership roster for the season. He was nineteen, skinny, still in his school polo from a summer internship
  3. 3Ramona walked over at 4:45 in flip-flops and a clean gray t-shirt, with her tote on her shoulder and the deed in a gallon Ziploc bag because Delia had brought the peas and made her put a bag of them on her cheek, and the peas had left a w
  4. 4Dale's signature on the deed was not pretty. It slanted up to the right, the way signatures do when you're signing on the hood of a car or a counter you're not leaning on, and the "D" had a habit of losing its loop at the end. His "Brandt
  5. 5The earlier log was in the safe-deposit box that Dale Brandt kept at the Carthage Savings Bank on Main Street, box 441, and Ramona did not know that until Tuesday morning at 9:12 AM, when Sonya called her from the bank's parking lot.
  6. 6Ramona called at 8:30 Wednesday. Lane answered on the second ring.
  7. 7Ramona was on the second floor at 8:05 Thursday with the strip's legal description written on an index card, and she handed the card to the woman at the desk, and the woman typed it into the terminal, and looked at the screen, and looked
  8. 8"Yolanda says the box has been empty since Monday," Sonya said. "The log shows Dale was in there Monday at 9:07. Yolanda says she didn't see what he took out. She wasn't working the vault that day."